英语作文的句子怎么写 怎么把句子写长一点

　　句子是一篇文章的灵魂，写出好的句子才能写出好的文章。那么怎么写才能写出好的句子呢？好的句子是简洁、多变、清楚的句子。简洁指的是句子简单、明了，能用五个词表达的意思绝不用六个单词。多变指的是句子的长度、句型结构交叉变化，最好长短句结合使用。清楚指的是表达没有歧义。　　

　　同位语

　　原句：

　　Students have no choice but to learn knowledge from their teachers, who are experienced in specific subjects.

　　利用同位语，把从句变得更简洁：

　　Students have no choice but to learn knowledge from their teachers, experienced in specific subjects.

　　再举一个例子。

　　原句：

　　He was so assiduous that he gave up all his leisure time to research and develop the new drug.

　　同位语升级，把形容词提前：

　　Always assiduous, he gave up all his leisure time to reseach and develop the new drug.

　　插入语

　　原句：

　　The general atmosphere of the country and temperament (性情) of the people, and also the favourable climate, will undoubtedly offer many opportunities for an interesting social life.

　　插入语升级：

　　The general atmosphere of the country and temperament of the people, let alone (更不用说) the favourable climate, will undoubtedly offer many opportunities for an interesting social life.

　　独立主格

　　原句：

　　The students are active. The course contents are flexible and the atmosphere is harmonious.

　　独立主格结构升级：

　　The students are active the course contents flexible and atmosphere harmonious.

　　想要把句子写得漂亮的同学可以在自己的作文中有意识地去使用这些句型结构，或者对上面的句子进行仿写，把别人的句子变成自己文章中的句子。