The Pig and Watermelon-四年级获奖英语作文

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  作者姓名:王颖琪 辅导老师:徐静

  In spring, the mother pig took the little pig Lulu to the foot of the mountain. They planted some watermelons.

  When summer came, there are many big round watermelons in the field.

  One day, the sun was burning like a fire. It was terribly hot on the ground. The mother pig said to the little pig, “ Lulu, go to the field to pick a watermelon back, OK?” Lulu said happily “ OK,no problem.”

  Then he ran to the watermelon field. When he got to the field, he was happy to see so many big green watermelons. He chose one of the biggest watermelons and picked it from the vine. Then he held it with his hands trying to lift it on his shoulder to carry it home.

  “Wow! It’s so heavy.” Lulu tried many times but failed. And he was soaked with sweat. He wiped his sweat off and decided to have a rest.

  Suddenly he saw the monkey Pipi. He was playing with a hoop. Lulu patted his head and said“I’ve got it.” he thought, the round hoop can roll, the watermelon is round, too. Then it can roll, too. He then put the big watermelon on the ground and rolled it forward quickly.

  At last, he got home with the watermelon. The mother pig knew the story,she exclaimed “ My child, you are really clever!”

  点评:本文作者通过描写小猪运瓜的故事,表达了对小猪聪明好学的赞美之情,同时也体现了作者希望小朋友们遇事能够积极思考,努力解决现实问题的愿望。全文结构完整,意思连贯,会用then 等连词过渡。语言比较通顺,能正确使用with的复合结构。


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