My Family-关于家庭的英语获奖作文

　　作者姓名：邹思雨

　　I have a happy family. There are six people in my family. They are my father,mother, grandma, grandpa, brother and me.

　　My father’s name is Jason. He is a boss. He likes eating barbecue,lamb, roast fish and snack. My father’s hobby is swimming. He is good at singing,too.

　　My mother’s name is Ndiaye. My mother is very beautiful. She likes eating roast fish,too. She is good at cooking dish.

　　My grandma and grandpa are very old. They like the countryside life.

　　My brother is very young and graceful. He is a soldier. He is 21 years old. He likes playing computer. He doesn’t like clean up.

　　I am Lucy. I am 10 years old. I am a student. I’m very cute and tall.

　　I like my family very much. Do you like my family?

　　点评：本文作者通过对家人的介绍和对家人爱好的逐一描写，使每一个人的形象都展示在读者面前，表达了作者对家人的喜爱。全文结构严谨有序，以总-分-总的形式展开。能正确使用like及表擅长的词汇。句式应更丰富些，添加and等连接词，避免单调重复。

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