I Like Rainbows-描写彩虹的四年级英语作文

　　作者姓名：黄翰林 辅导老师：马力

　　I like rainbows. I can see a rainbow after raining. It is so beautiful. It has seven colors. They are red, orange, pink, yellow, green, blue and purple. I like these colors.

　　I like red. Red is a symbol of warmness. The sun is red.

　　I like orange. Orange is a symbol of happiness. The orange is orange.

　　I like yellow. Yellow is a symbol of calmness. The flower is yellow.

　　I like green. Green is a symbol of life. The trees are green.

　　I like blue. Blue is a symbol of purity. The sky is blue.

　　I like pink. Pink is a symbol of cuteness. The bowknot is pink.

　　I like purple. Purple is a symbol of nobility. The grapes are purple.

　　I like rainbows. Do you like it?

　　点评：本文描写了彩虹的七种不同颜色，每种颜色都有一个象征意义，并且举出实物例子，可见作者在生活中是善于观察，勤于思考的有心人。语言简洁凝练，富有韵律。但句式过于单一，如能变换句式将更好。

本文为原创文章，版权归作者所有，未经授权不得转载!